I have been reading about Haiku and I think I may start a book of Haiku for myself.
Here are my first two -
Pussywillow gone
Birds with no food at their water
Fish gasping with air
Too gloomy? How about this...
Violin stings plucked
A quiet cymbal waiting
Music on the way
Now this one feels good!
Weary of waiting
1 day ago
2 comments:
funny, the first time i moved to japan i envisioned myself sitting near mt. fuji and writing haiku but i never got around to it.
i like yours, especially the 2nd one. read the first and see if you can find a slight error.
maybe i should write haiku since i am the country of its origin. let`s see if i can write one off the top of my head.
beautiful black cat
round belly filled with kittens
wish to make them mine
i took a break from kitty feeding today because i am exhausted from doing so much yesterday. more on that in nagoya news on sunday.
have a great weekend!
teresa
OMG! I can see that cat right now. Nice.
No, I don't see any errors in my first one. Were you thinking ..."in" their water?
It's warm and sunny this evening in Seattle. I hope you have a good weekend too!
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